1/30/2022 Poetry by Dan Carey renee. CC
To the Cousins I Barely Know Some of you have done time, some have disappeared into and out of bars; some succeeded in leaving our family somewhere between Bridgewater and Percocet. Cousins, you grow like galaxies, when I think of how many planets you could be. In our family, blood takes the form of a tree, or it loiters, shapeless as dust that molds into the stars. Dad didn’t talk much back then, so how could I know another of you won a few bareknuckle fights, got jumped and was left for dead, while your sister knocked down Max’s door with a baseball bat? In the space between us, bones break, and I have stories only; nothing when we meet at funerals. Instead of talk, we breathe a silence of cracked ribs, in a strange cage. Dan Carey is a poet from Massachusetts, currently living in San Francisco. His work has appeared in Dropout Literary Magazine. He hopes his poems about addiction and mental illness will connect people with similar experiences, as well as create a platform for those to better understand themselves and the various diseases that afflict many people.
John Carey
2/14/2022 06:54:30 pm
Deep, very deep
Moe Beaton
2/15/2022 04:50:18 pm
Profound! Well done Daniel!
Marissa Trunfio
3/7/2022 07:28:46 pm
Dan, this is wonderful! :) I especially like the opening to your second stanza: "Cousins, you grow like galaxies when I think of how many planets you could be." The imagery here is really beautiful and profound; that entire stanza in particular is very vivid, as each line connects into the next so seamlessly. I love the metaphor of dust transforming into stars; all stars are made of carbon, which of course, is in all of us! When stars supernova, they eject carbon into space. All the carbon in our galaxy, the Milky Way, actually came from dying stars! I remember Neil Degrasse Tyson saying that when he looks up at the sky, he does not feel small. Instead, he feels very big, because he knows that a part of the universe is in him. (Thanks for jogging my mind on this!) The next line I especially like opens your final stanza: "In the space between us, bones break, and I have stories only..." At the end of the day, we all only have our stories, don't we? We know our own stories the best, but the stories of other people linger on in us, and inadvertently shape who we are. To thine own self be true! This was lovely for me to read at the end of a long day studying. Thank you for sharing, and congratulations on getting published. I can't wait to read more of your poems--hopefully, I will be able to soon! --Marissa :)
Tamarah Rapacioli
3/7/2022 08:07:40 pm
This poem is deep and very beautiful Daniel. You are a very talented and creative individual. Comments are closed.
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